Proposal Review & Recommendations for 3 Grant Opportunities

I have 3 small grants that our nonprofit wants to apply to. I have drafted an application for one of the grants. I'd like for a volunteer to review the draft and provide feedback on formatting and any gaps in the information I've provided.

This project will help us tremendously in obtaining our mission and vision:
OUR MISSION
To bring about positive change and healing in our communities through education and awareness.
OUR VISION
Create a supportive and safe environment, empowering sexual violence survivors with the tools to live life to the fullest.

It's about community - Communities will benefit from our projects. As individuals heal, they can contribute positively to their communities. Moreover, raising awareness about trauma and its effects can lead to more empathetic and supportive communities.

Proposal drafts will be completed by me. The completed applications will be submitted in response to grants for funding, which will help sustain our organization and allow us to be about the business of helping others.